All Comments on 'Hot Summer Vacation with Threesome'

Some word problems mar this otherwise very good story.

shutter should be shudder

fury should be furry (these are completely different words and do not sound alike.)

“You are” s

hould be shortened to “you’re” mot “your”

These are the errors I caught with a fast reading. Keep trying.

Nice Story!!! Bud

Lucky Mathew, a mouth full of cum and a tight pussy on his cock and in public, my ultimate scenario made my cock hard

Great story! Sometimes only a boy knows what a boy really likes!