by JDSavanyu
fucking in a hot tub is painful, for both parties, unless a shit ton of silicone-based lube that won't wash away, like her natural juices, gets used. Like fucking a rubber wetsuit, not a pussy. Anyone thinks hot tub sex works well hasn't actually tried it, or the guy has a tiny dick.
All the "bro"s kind of weirded me out, and like a previous commenter said, it sounded like two dudes talking to each other, but the sex was well described and hot, even if the premise and buildup was cheesy af.
The writing’s not bad - you clearly are talented at it and I like all the references bc I more or less got them all. And I did get my nut to this story - tho it had been building thru a few stories. It could’ve been better without all the right-wing/Breitbart talking points, esp. mocking the #MeToo mvmt (awful things happened to real people - just by them existing - pls don’t reduce that to a glib, toxically masculine, right-wing nothing). I hope you are not an Incel or an Incel adjacent.
Is the sister a fella? This is two dudes with all the bro talk. So close to being great.