All Comments on 'Hot Tub Voyeur'

There has to be more to this fantasy and it should restart in two days when John's wife cums, i mean arrives, and joins them.

...no one got hurt...no one got upset ****

Scribe: In just reading your comments in your intro , I think most people won't mind sharing . It is in the deceit of going behind your spouse's back , that most have trouble. If both agree to what ever situation arises , and nothing is hidden from your spouse , "All's fair in love and war" . So write what you feel , but be aware , Cheaters sooner or later get caught . Anyone who criticizes you needs to remember , This is ALL fiction and fantasy ! Thanks and keep on writing !

The opening dialogue was a little awkward but not a bad story. I would have liked it better if you had spent more time on how the exhibitionism/voyeurism affected them and their arousal level. 4 stars

I enjoyed

Yes, an enjoyable playful session for Susan & stranger Tim in the hot tub and with the added bonus of John satisfying himself. My immediate thought was where is this resort and the name of it!

Playful sessions like this are a dream come true for both exhibitionists and voyeurs alike. And more to the point, the theme of the story is very believable which adds to the sexual gratification for all.

Definitely worth 5* and the hope that there will be a sequel.

Not much hope for a man whose fetish is watching hot tubs.

Nice story. For the record, voyeurism is watching others. Exhibitionism is being exposed and seen. Also proofread. The errors become distracting. So , is there a part two?