by ThatOneCouplefor2
Great story on the old classic. May only be my thing but as the women have broken the boundary to play with each other, maybe the men as well?
Fantastic awesome easy erotic read, got me wishing it could happen to me.
Perfect balance between sexually charged build up and hot sex. Can't wait to read more.
Definitely needs a sequel. I appreciate the play leading up to the sex. It lets the reader get to know and like the characters. My wife and I (we often read the stories out loud) don't really get interested unless there are men and women in the story to whom we can relate. Stories that start with a short paragraph with measurements and athletic/financial accomplishments before sex just doesn't do it for us. If the characters were real (and they seem real in this story) I would love to watch my wife have sex with any of them and then I would enjoy having sex with either (or both) Beth and Song (maybe with some help from Frank and Tony).