All Comments on 'Hotel'

If you used "Spellcheck", it would be a better story.

Dude, you need more than spell check. You need to proofread your story prior to submission. If you can't see the mistakes, find an editor.

Please get an editor if you're going to persist in writing for this site. It almost seems as if you deliberately use inappropriate homophones. The story, once you get past the spelling and grammar problems, is an interesting premise.

About your spelling and grammar. If I want good writing I go to the library. If I want real life then I come here. Unless I want wimp husband /whore wife stories, which I don't. I notice that everytime a person writes a story about a non cheating couple thet the only course of action the wimp/humility.whore lovers get at the writer with this anal rententive shit. Don't give up on writing stories that don't involve cheating wives,cuckolds and wimp husbands. NYMINUS

It's not JUST misspelled words. Wife's refers to something that belongs to a wife. Wives is the plural of wife. Hell, if you are going to write stories in nglish, you should at least know the language. I couldn't even read the lame ass story!

I couldn't get past the 2nd paragraph:

Joan and I have been happily married for ten years and I want to keep it that way so I have Joan to go with me on all my trips. I have see(n) men in my company and other companies to that fully intend to be fateful (faithful) to their wives and have a few to (too) many (to) drink and end up in bed with a whore. It hardly ever fails that there (their) infidelity get back to their wife's (wives) and ends with a divorce. That('s) why I have Joan to (strike "to") accompany (me) on the trips so I want (won't) make the mistake that some of my friends have.