All Comments on 'Hotel Adventures Ch. 01'

I really liked it. Hope u take this further

Please watch your words as Todd is sometimes John--unless she has two husbands.

Good story!

The theme was unique, interesting and well developed. The writing was crisp, tight, and descriptive. Very, very creative. You have talent! Keep writing!

Very different from the usual LW offerings. Thank you! Please continue to write about a truly loving wife and husband, not a cheating wife and wimpy cuck.

You are a talented writer. You turn a nice phrase without overdoing it. Very easy to read. Your story had tension. Will she get caught while spying on her sexy couple? Will hubby dear be upset with her confession? It is very hard to write tension without relying on out and out cheating, or cuckolding, but you did it!

The sex scenes were very erotic. The wives are truly "loving". You added enough history to keep it in an understandable context without adding too many extra pages. It was also good how you describe the feelings of the characters so we understand possible motives. All in all a wonderful story. Keep up the good work! *****

This story had a build up slow enough to be turned on but not so slow you lose interest. Amazing details and descriptions, you actually feel like you are back in the Hallway with her. Extremely erotic without being overdone. Write more!!!

Really good. Easy to read. Builds nicely. The setting provides ample opportunity for more. Many thanks !