All Comments on 'Hotter than Fiction 1997'

Very hot story, but I don't understand why it repeats.

Dear reader,

There's a technical problem with the text. The story actually ends on page 4 with the words "I’ll find out soon enough I’m sure". I have already submitted an edited version, which hopefully will be available within a week.

Thank you for your patience,

DeeKay

Love the story. Very arousing, and except for the repeat of the story it is powerfully graphic and emotes the kinds of feeling I remember from my first threesome years ago. I missed your earlier attempt, but this one looks promising, and I look forward to more!

Pardon me for sounding like Liv when she's sexually stimulated, but OH MY FUCKING GOD, this was SOOO FUCKING GOOD!!! It had absolutely everything you could possibly want in an erotic story, plus it added those really nice touches of humor throughout. If only I could have found a sexy older couple like this when I was Dee's age, it would have been worth being kicked out of my family's home. You need to get 10 times 5*s for this story.

I love cock, and pussy and ass and this story. Especially the rough sex. Thanks for a good cum!

What an AMAZING story. Some similarities with my first threesome but you were much more prepared for cock than I was. Loved your stories and hope you enjoy mine as soon as they are "approved"...Thanks for sharing and generating some tasty precum for me to enjoy :)

Gosh, that was one hot story!

Wow ,gorgeous .I was reading this in my garden and had to stroke myself I got so hard x

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