by creativeboyinspring
I really liked the story but was dissapointed when it just stopped with no ending. I assume she will be stuck in the house getting for eternity but it would have been nice if you explained that. Maybe write about how she’s used non stop day and nite etc. maybe there will be a chapter 2?
agree with the other comments. Add a little to finish it off. Could do it in many ways. Maybe a fire takes her house, investigators determine it was a cell phone battery, exploded, that started the fire. Or whatever. Somehow you need the old man in it. Maybe he had an adverse health event, and he's moving to an old folks home. So knowledge of the house and its history is being lost, while the house continues as it has been doing for centuries perhaps. Thx again for another great story. Imagine, being taken as a female submissive, and being fucked for eternity, against your will but not, as you are truly taken by the forced sexual bliss, and your mind is too weak to protest. Like a lot of submissive's today feel as they can't help but allow themselves to be fully exposed, with name/id, in front of their society - chaining and changing them forever.
Very creepy. I liked the visual of the people standing with their back to her. But overall it feels rushed. The Eroticism is all at end and honestly light considering what this author has made before. Also the way it stops without an honest conclusion feels jarring. I hope there is more
Lol the supernatural ghost story elements of this one actually scared me the way a reality good horror movie does. If removing the s/a elements of this story and replacing it with something else, I think this could be a great movie. I feel spooked.