All Comments on 'House of Feathers Ch. 24: An Unexpected Proposal'

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William_WoodWilliam_Woodalmost 5 years ago
Great for such a short read

I hadn't read any of the other parts, but I guess I'll have to get around to it after this. Just enough information for a new reader to enjoy this as an independent story, and just the right balance of build up and sex. The idea of being woken up several during the night struck me as a particularly erotic, delicious fantasy (despite the fact in real life I personally am always happy to sleep through the night afterwards!).

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