by Babul700
Is everyone in India a fucking whore or beta cuck? Just curious, because one or both are central to every Indian story on this site.
You need some serious help, psychologically as well as in writing skills.
I saw this was your first and clearly 99% of everyone here is truly hoping its your last.
Outright garbage, retread.
Loved it. She should allow him access to her big ass and save her pussy for the husband.
I am saying this to a few intestines. When you don't have the ability to write your own story, you don't have the right to criticize other peopIe's stories.. Now fuck off
This is a very exciting story! Part 2 will be on my list. The way that you build the plot works very well! I would like to see him come back the next day and how you develop the scenes with your own style!! Do not listen to the naysayers in the comments. They are either jealous or they don’t understand what Literotica is all about. Continue on please! I would like eventually to see her get involved with others as well (either Birju’s friends or perhaps her husband’s work friends)
26thNC, iameasel, muskyboy you all are ass hole.. ever been able to write a story in life?
Possibly explains why our India based helpdesk is seeming manned by imbeciles.
Oh my! If we don't care for this filthy garbage we are asshole... Is this a story in life?
Please continue, I for one loved it. And would love her to be bred and pregnant by Birju.
One small error that needs correcting. Near the beginning of the story it says she seduced her baby twice when he was crying. The word you’re looking for is “soothed”.