All Comments on 'How Far Can They Go? Ch. 04'

unwriteableness? Santoses? Myerses? shlicking? hornyness? Needs a little 'cleaning up' before submitting.

@Anonymous

Erm... I don't want to sound mean, I'm actually really happy that you liked this story installment enough to try to leave a constructive comment, but, unfortunately, most of your suggestions are rather wrong. "Unwriteableness" is definitely quite a rare word, but I'm actually not the first one to have used it by a long shot, and there's nothing really gramatically incorrect about it. "Santoses" and "Myerses" are both perfectly correct plural forms of those surnames, which is something I've checked numerous times when writing this story. "Shlicking" is a semi-common term for female masturbation. Maybe not the official term, but not anything that would confuse an average reader. Thanks for pointing out that I should have written "horniness" instead of "hornyness", though, I'll change it later.