by Thors_Fist
While I prefer Beth's story (I'm so glad it's back), I still enjoy Brick's story too.
I have a lot of kinks, including incest. The only type of incest stories that I don't like are parent/offspring or grandparent. Step parents are OK if the child wasn't raised by them and doesn't call them daddy or mommy or such.
What I'm getting at is PLEASE don't have Jeri fuck her dad, even if he's not biological.
ThorsFist - what a misnomer after writing wimpy/cuck stories likes this. How about we rename him LimpWrist. 1*
Go into more detail on each breeding so we can have the full experience. Looking forward to another chapter.
The story belonged in the trash can chapters ago. Give it a rest. ONE STAR
Frankly I've very much enjoyed the story! Not so much for the sex although that's been fairly good and pretty descriptive.
What I've found the most interesting is the author's description of what motivates a man who is a cuckold. His descriptions and things he's presented as fact, very much fit me as a cuckold.
My only regret is not having this information when I was much younger. It has helped me understand and accept what I am.
Thank you,
Anonymous who are reading the 14th chapter in a story and give 1 star have zero credibility. Why are your still reading?
I’m disappointed that Phillip was given no time in the story. We’ve had no conversations between Phillip & Laura. Laura has been a constant in this story from chapter one. Does she love Phillip more or less at this stage? Laura never asked to be with Phillip alway told she will go to him. Not convinced she even thinks of him. Who’s more important Roxanne or Laura to Phillip?
In other stories on literotica the simple forced piercing of ears to a cuckboy and the emotions that run through them are a good read. But Phillip getting his nipples pierced was a total non event. Laura didn’t make anything of his changes. Nipple piercing are big for anyone but only the lovers see them. Phillip getting ears pierced with Diamond studs for all to see would have been better.
The ending with Grace was a Little flat. Would have been nice if the power struggle between Jeri & Grace ramped up a little by Grace declaring Bricks cock is welcome any time any place. Jeri worried her Mum might get more Brick than her.
Love the story. 5 stars
OK, DEAR AUTHOR, I am so ready to get away from this cuckolding. For me, just way too much INFO. This chapter went a long way towards more CHARACTER development. As this is not my thing, I was bored. However, I do enjoy all the descriptions of the expensive, upscale food and beverages, travel, limos, clothes,and hotels. Continue to appreciate your EDITOR. You make a good team ! 5 stars.