All Comments on 'How I Became a Breeding Bull Ch. 23'

Hope Vincent plants a baby in Ariel.

With this chapter, it seems, DEAR AUTHOR that you are back on track to your regular standard of writing. VINCENT seems to be an interesting character. Glad to see ARIEL being featured again. Especially like that BRICK is back at the HYATT and the dance club. 5 stars

DEAR AUTHOR, LOST INTEREST