by JENnRASP
A hotwife? You? Nah a bitch and cuckqueen and married to a pathetic wimp cuck.
I feel this story had a lot of potential and if time was invested into editing the story, I feel, this story could have been an excellent story. Howver your writing style is quite unstructured, there is no flow to the story and this story reads as though your are rambling thereby causing me to loose interest about 1/2 through it. Hopefully, if you write a chapter 3 for this story you will take the time to edit it and add some structure to it.
Oh Jen, It is so much fun to show off isn't it? I love to and my husband loves it too when I do it. Please keep on with your story! Annie :)
I love the slow build up. Keep it going, this story is hot.
this story only gets better and more erotic and very horny.
i cant wait to read the parts that have your very hot horny wet pussy well and truly fucked . loving my own thoughts all i can say is more more.
Very, Very hot! A few weeks ago I convinced my wife (52) To
> make out w/ my best friend. After 10 minuts or so they
> were both naked and playing with each other while still
> making out. There was no oral sex but I would not be
> opposed if there had been. Next they both masterbated
> themselves and he left. Our sex was very hot that
> night and next morning. Ihope your stories will encourage
> her to do this again! Please let us know when you post part
> 3.
its great story and the slow build up , lots of details, i can't wait for next part <3
I just love the build up. You certainly are a sexy little Hotwife! ;) Thanks for sharing this post! More please!!!!
I do like to build up very sexy. Looking forward to ch 3
LOVED the story! Can't wait to read what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for all your nice comments I had just posted some photos which is supposed to complement the stories. You may read and see visual pics at the same time as it is relevant to it. If you wanna see how I looks like, go to the "Amateur Pic Feedback" in the Bulletin Board. I had posted my photos there:-
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=769739
Thank you and hope you like it....
Jen
with kisses
Loved the way you filled in the details leading up to you watching Eddie jerk off and played with yourself to give him a big climax.
Cannot hardly wait to hear the next installment. Thank you.
Will
As with the first chapter, I enjoyed the detail in your writing. Keep up the good work.
I hope you will not delay too long, before writing the next chapter; I am hoping that it will be very hot, maybe spice up the passion, with hot sex language.
I think this series need a chapter 3. Very nice and believable progression..
It does take awhile to persuade a wife to violate her comfort zone and explore alternatives to her staid role of being a wife and a mother. However, with love and patience and exposure to sexy clothing, nightclubs, and different men most women begin to come around; mine did!
Cheap slut is more appropriate. What's sexy or erotic about that?
1 star
One of hundreds of the same old slut and cuck tales. Stupid and ridiculous. Won’t it be nice to find a writer capable of having a husband not be a wimp or a pathetic cuck. Or maybe even a wife that is loyal and true. Oh wait, they can’t do that because it would mess up their drive to sell their perverted Cuck a Doodle Do lifestyle.
Wouldn't have thought you could get any worse than part one, but you outdid yourself.
26thNC is a fucking moron! He actually is a dumb fucks dumb fuck!
I love this story. When I started seeing my husband, I met a few of his friends as well. I suppose I enjoyed their looks and after mentioning it to my guy, he encouraged me to wear sexier clothes around his friends. He even went as far as to buy me new outfits. We both really got turned on when I would wear something see through or “accidents” flash a nipple. It wasn’t much longer before he wanted to go further. And to be honest, so did I. It progressed to sex in front of one of them, then allowing him to touch me. Eventually I got to enjoy several of them over time. My husband and I have been married for almost 35 years now and he still gets excited when another man flirts with me.