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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great start! I’ve love for you to add some detailed narrative and even more dialogue in the places you feel are most sexy. Take me there! And good to for for “going for it!”

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Daddydom sharing some random 'stories.' Feel free to ask me a question or give some critiques of my works.