All Comments on 'How I became General Faenora's Slut'

I love seeing New people write good stuff on their first try because it means they will have more things to right that are also good so keep at it

Hmm, just go in for a kiss and surprise! Tear out her jugular with your teeth.

Rough!

Nice story. But there is a crucial element missing: pain. Being fucked (not to mention defiled) by such a magnificent cock always involves some pain. And for most of us faggots, that pain is an integral part of our sexual pleasure, no pain, no gain.