All Comments on 'How I Got My Mom Pregnant'

write more and longer

Is this a work of fiction?

promising you should keep writing maybe there is some talent there

Hot story for your very first. Well written for me so please keep going.

I liked the story, but too short. Please continue to write and add more details to the people involved. The sex parts as well as the people so I can really get into the story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

and Hot! I liked it!

That's rape

I really liked this and would love to see more of this but not so fast paced as this one was. There was no kind of build up letting on that the son was even into the mother and the sex was even rushed as there was no descriptions past the quickie explanations

Poor grammar made this very hard to read.

Short and sweet is good. You do not always need to have big developed characters. You do need to find an editor. There were several grammatical mistakes. Good writing is not just about the story.

The large number of grammatical and spelling errors ruined it for me, and in my opinion it was rape. I may read your next submission but i doubt it.

Good, but too short.

Spend more time on character development and the sexiness will follow.

He raped her, got her pregnant, and she is fine with it????????? Right

It truly is awful. An editor may have helped. Since I cannot rate this as a zero, it will not get a rating from me.

Good Story. This is not a literature or English assessment now but a story.

I really wish you young and first time writers would get an editor. I couldn't get past the 3rd paragraph before my intelligence had been insulted. Either get an editor; learn basic english, or just don't right anymore. Have a nice day.

Demonstrates that there are people in this world who need neutering at birth. Would save passing on the "rape is okay with me" gene.

I mean come on, this was meant to be an actual story? I could have gotten past the whole he raped her and she's okay with it part, but this feels more like a summary of a story idea. Even a basic spell check would have shown the most basic of errors made here. Honestly it's stories like this that make it hard to find the good stories that are worth reading. I feel like I've been robbed of my time after reading this.

How did this even get past the moderator? This is barely a thousand words and most of those words are pure, incoherent gibberish. If I don't like a story, then I try to find something redeeming about it but that's simply impossible with this one. How it has got a rating of 4+ and so many views I will never understand. Utter trash.

Hope he his mom knocked every 8 months.i did to my mom we have 6 kids together and also my aunt my 6 kids too

But a little short

Way too short, need to write a follow-up about adding more kids to just the one.

Mum is the only person I’ve had sex with. We’ve been together since I was 16. I’m now 30 she’s 49. We live as husband and wife. We have 3 perfectly healthy kids together.

Every mom should at least let their knock them up. Me knockup my mom my aunt mom sister my sister and my cousin aunt oldest daughter we bought big enough house us we get together one room have family orgy I one of them fuck them in front everyone each ends up kid in them my cousin and sister end up 5 kids each mom and aunt 3 each I like keeping them knockup they even taken on my friends and every weekend gangbang weekend for them last groups they took on 20 black guys my cousin sister both carrying black kid them

Liked story this true story where my mom came over to my place we sat down couch see triple e before we sat down grabbed her tits leaned into her told her your Sister Rachel well I got her pregnant with my kid in her then my mom said where aun now I said in bedroom said to her that Rachel and me want threesome with you the she got up went bedroom once mom saw her sisterstart taking my moms clothes off her told mom get on your back told my mom lick and suck Rachels cunt and ass my aunt started orgasming flood mom face then I unloaded into my moms cunt and ass then my aunt leaned forward suck lick mom cunt and ass mom screamed them mom shoved her hand up Rachels cunt screamed again then my aunt did it to my mom heard her scream then it got very interestìng pulled hands out of my mom she looked at me said your mom carrying your kid in me they borh filed for their divorce got it now three of us now living full time together every day and night we have threesome in end I end up having 6 kids three from my mom three from my aunt to this both of them in their sixries we still have threeway untill one day 2 of my friends we started fucking ass and cunt sametime both woman scream they were yelling my cunt or ass they end up being sluts to my frriends and me

I do wish people would quit telling illiterates to get an editor. They don't need an editor; they need an education. Any editor who agrees to 'fix' this garbage isn't going to fix it. They might not even improve it. If an editor knows what they're doing, they're not going to be willing to do more work on it than the person who vomited it onto the page, even if they get paid.

Besides that, I don't see anything redeeming about this submission. There is no plot, there is nothing but an unconscious woman that gets raped by her son. That's not a story, it's a crime.

Now that I think about it, trying to pawn this off as literature should be a crime, too. Fraud. Please, stop wasting the website's resources and readers' time.

could have been longer.

One thing agree with mother should sex with son even take chance she gets pregnant by her son and learn to accept it if your single

cageysea9725, if you read some of the anonymous comments before yours, apparently punctuation and grammatical sense is losing its need these days. smdh

I fucked my mom first time and my sister in same room threesome they both end up pregnant by me and still do theeesome together every chance we get and every year end up pregnant they each had three kids until one day we had gangbang party went to alot of couples mom and my sister get taken to room in middle four king size mattress and 20 black guys we all watch them fuck both of them dp to double vag by time guys were borh woman were sore and three days later pregnant black kid in them they went every weekend to get gangbangedwhile pregnant

If Ewe doesn't like how peeple spellz,, or da wey that tale got ritten... stay off this sight.

Join a foreum dat katerz two you're need

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Nice story mate, enjoyed it and I like quick reads at lunch.

Taking mom fucking her getting pregnant love it.my mom aunt and my sister let me fuck them I have 3 kids waiting to be born

Nice!!! Mom sounds like a hott MILF!!

which trailer park was this in?

Every mom should have witheir son take chance of getting knocked up

Great story. If you and your mother continue to f*** I hope she went on the pill. By the way you never said was she a good f*** or just a port in the storm.

When mother lets son or sons fuck her she get pregnant then let her self get pregnant by son you know she let it happen me got my mom and aunt knocked up sametime we still have threesome to this day

If I was to ever fuck my mom,I’m am going to cum in her.that’s just how I am.no matter how many loads

great story. same with me. my mom and i are lovers and i have also got her pregnant

I got Mom pregnant (first time) when I was 13 and she was 33. Dad was off weekends playing golf with one of his older girlfriends.

A good story. A little to short to jack off to it though.