All Comments on 'How I Married a Porn Star - Finale'

Well done on the plot twist. I did not see that one happening. 5 stars. I've already read one of your other stories and loved it. Can't wait for more of your work.

This was a nice series and it was fun to read and follow along. I’d love to see a little side story on what happened when he returned to Flagstaff with two gorgeous women from the porn industry and how that played out, but I’m greedy like that 😂

Thanks for this!

Great series! Looking forward to more in the future.

Really enjoyed the story line kept me waiting for the next chapter

She did feel like his true soulmate. Thank you for the story.

Wonderful story, awesome fantasy.

An editor would help but not the end of the world. Still loved the entire story.

THANK YOU!

The first chapters were a lot of fun. The last one just felt rushed.

Great story, I especially loved the 1st and 2nd chapter. In the end, it felt a bit rushed. Of course, you can still build on the story for next chapters about life after the convention. Should be good fun.

If one of the porn producers runs with this story, I think it has the makings of an excellent movie with the cream of the stars and a good developing plot as the chapters move on. It has the potential to snag a couple of AVN Awards

Thanks for a great story

Well of course life doesn’t work that way….but it should. 😁

Great story. I had never heard of Cassandra Calogera before this, but now that I've checked her out, she is gorgeous

Great story. I had never heard of Cassandra Calogera before this, but after checking her out, she is gorgeous

I really enjoyed this series. Would like if you did another one of these porn star stories.

I loved that story (especially the 1St part) can you please do a second poem star series? I really loved your storytelling and writing

I really enjoyed that story. Thank you.

Fantabulous writing. Great plot, well written. Couple minor grammar issues, not sure if you have someone to proof read, if not you should. . Thanks for an enjoy couple of evenings.

Awesome series!!! Shame it had to end...

Excellent story. Loved the insight involving the porn stars as being human.

Interesting as to how the future will be a time moves along.

Loved the story. I wouldn't mind reading the letter from Mr. Sims.

A really fun and well-paced story.

Easy to read and enjoy!

5/5

It was nice to see porn stars depicted as nice people

Really good writing, marred somewhat by the usual lie-lay-laid and I-me errors that are so notorious on Literotica.

Rumpleminty: Please don't ever stop writing. Super is just one verb. Hell, I could fill up the entire comments section with my thoughts. But I will not. Just keep "truckin".

A nice sequel story could be based on the AVN shown the following year with the people all meeting back up and telling their stories of the past year

I enjoyed the whole series.

The characters felt real and human,

and gave the readers a more intimate

look at the AVN biz.

If this story is an indication of where you were headed in "prize day", then I cannot wait to see the final chapter(s) . I like stories where the good guy wins(and the girls are glad of it!). Write on Rumpleminty, write on!

I loved the story but it sure was a college student's pipe dream. If only ...

Is part 4 missing? I can’t seem to find it.

What a fun story I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I added it to my favorites

Thanks for writing

GREAT fantasy story. 5 stars!

Pretty good. I especially liked the part that both Sara and Cass promised to be exclusive with no other dicks. That would rest a lot of anxiety and unnecessary emotions.

Awesome story!!! Good people, having great sex, while living the best life they can!! I loved it!! Also, I really enjoyed how the porn stars were depicted good, and caring people!!

Awesome story! Good guys do finish first!!

Good Story.

If read only as a "sex" story, this would be average, with the scenes a little rushed and perfunctory, but man the narrative is fantastic! You really know how to tell a good story. I was completely engrossed and woujld love to hear more about Sean, and all of the women.

Great story, the way some of the narrative went had me laughing, reminding me of the cut scene in Dumb and Dumber when Lloyd and Mary are having a couples night with Lloyds antics. I had fun reading this, thanks for the entertaining story.

Surprisingly wholesome story. Thanks 😊

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Top Shelf Story!

An excellente male fairy tale.

As a resident of 'Sin City' and a former casino employee, I appreciate the references and bits like comps and really like that you had the characters tipping the staff when they used their comps (that's the proper form).

11/10!!!!!

A totally ridiculous, impossible story plot. And a great read! Congrats! For the record I fully approve of your choice of Sara Stone, but I think I'd go the other way for the other woman and choose Kelly Kline (don't tell Cassandra).

Great story! Loved that Sara was one of your women!

One of my favorite stories!!!

Pleasant story.

Holly Michaels would be a great choice to include in one of your stories. Loved this one.

Excellent!

Отличная история!

Хотя, никого не хочу обидеть, удивляет что все девушки "тесные". Все же странно, прямо скажем)