All Comments on 'How I was Trained Pt. 14'

So very intriguing and intense!!!

Love the path you’re taking with this story!

This has gotten a little too strange for me. If he was supposed to become this mystical woman, he/she wouldn't have needed her neighbor to force hormones and feminization training to make her one. I thought the whole, "she's wise beyond her years," thing was funny. This is a person that can't do anything on his/her own by the neighbor's design.

Getting too sci-fi with the telepathy and mind reading stuff. 2 Stars

I am enjoying the path and as i have said before always look forward to the next one. I like that they are short. Makes for a nice quick read but at the same time I want to know how it is all going to end.