All Comments on 'How It All Began'

by PreciousGem

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LadyMelanieLadyMelanieover 15 years ago
Great start

Loved it!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
seems like it's time to change locations

She should just pack-up and move on, unless Max has a good offer for her. As with all whores, if the money is worth it she will do about anything that Max would want. I hope to read more of the story....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
How it all began

You can't leave it at that. Finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
finish please

please add more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story line

I had read this about a year ago and came back to reread it. Was hoping that by now there would have been more added to it. I really enjoyed this story and I hope you will add to it soon, I'd like to know what happens between her and Max. Please do finish the story.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 12 years ago
Whore

So which is the alter-ego, the whore or the waitress?

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