All Comments on 'How It All Started'

Hope there is a lot more!

Erotic without being crude, well written too. Please keep going.

This is just a stroke story. Maybe I would have given it a higher rating as "erotic encounters" but as it is, it's just endless sex that quickly got boring. I need a little bit more in my stories, like characterization and a PLOT.

I don't know why every new wimp husband story writer who comes here thinks they have something new and wonderful to offer. In fact, all of the stories read exactly the same way, they all use the same phrases, the same action, and the same story line. This "story" is no different. If there's one "my mate came over and fucked my wife" story on this site from some twit in the UK, there are ten thousand. What astounds me is that they keep coming!

Don't mind the crude republican comments.. They are just mad because:

1 No woman will have them.

2 No mens room was involved

3 There was no tapping of loafers

Oh you English - you sure know how to disrespect and humiliate yourselves. How does one pimp out his beloved before marriage without future considerations [such as his pimping fee, bastard babies, etc].<P>

How does youse guys ever figure out your family trees henaway? Does the wimp get a sample of DNA from each cock in his ho before the second or after the last?<P>

Ah - the challenges of wimpdom - and the sadnesses for those who really think it's exciting.

that you English girls are as easy to take as your cricket team.

I loved it! I have cum three times over it, and my wife loved it too.. I cant wait to have this happen to me, she really got horny over this one...

We both request you continue your stories!

it's an exceptionally erotic story, beccie. go right ahead!

Hope to hear more from you soon!

but not a lot of story. The sex scenes weren't particularly well done nor does the author provide much of a plot. I suppose the characters were described well enough but the story isn't interesting enough to cause me to invest anything emotionally in them. She's a flirt who's self-centered and likes lots of dicks. He gets off being cuckolded and having other men fuck his wife. The blandness with which these quirks of character are presented are apparently intended to make this behavior seem commonplace. The attempt fails.

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As a stroke story, it's so-so. As erotic fiction, it's a flop.

Ignore the anonymous idiots that waste their time reading stories they say they do not like. Please continue this very erotic tale.

It's as if you knew a couples fantasy ... will watch for more...

For your first story, it was great and I'm sure you'll get better. I know a couple of american guys who have had similar experiences with their wives/girlfriends soI'm not sure what all the comments about the english are about? Insecurities maybe about themselves liking it a bit too much? I hope you tell us more about your other experiences.

I loved your story. It describes a fantasy the thought of which gives me a thrill. Written from a woman's perspective makes it even better. Don't put much value into the negative comments, obviously from people who are not into this sort of thing. Yes please, leave us some more!

Hubby to be encourages his wife to be and the probable mother of someones children to fuck a friend of his with a bigger cock so he can watch - the cock.<P>

Then when she later has some second thoughts and express that to her wimp he asks if she liked the bigger cock because he sure did.<P>

Now what did I miss? He is a pimp who likes to watch and she is a whore who likes others larger cocks. These seem like normal english people who are into self disrespect and male humiliation /disrespect and watching larger cocks.<P>

Arousing? No. - Exciting? No. Except to those self cuckolds into male humiliation and a male writer acting as a whore.<P>

Nah - I don't think I missed anything - nor anything worth the write or read time wasted.

Not sure where these people who love to tear these stories apart come from. I have read this excellent story a few times, nowhere does Beccie say that Joe had a bigger cock than her husbands and he most certainly wasn't cuckold, she was the submissive one. Being cuckold suggests humiliation, that certainly didn't come across in this story. If you don't like this kind of story that is fine, don't read them. Carry on writing Beccie, I for one throughly enjoyed it.

Please keep writting more, more character building of the primary couple and go slow with your experimentation, keep it real.

After a good start middle and on were disapointing with routine repetitive formulaic plot.

can prick. If you dont care about STDs, HIV, or other diseases it is a great way of life. Short but mindblowing.

That a fun story.

Just an excrement of a perverted mind.Just like most of Brit writers. Well deserved 1 star.

Your story reminds me of the life my wife and I had with many of our friends and we are still in love as the day we got married 51 years ago.Keep up the good work.

Loved it, shame yot havent written more.

A great, hot, sexy story, well written.

gave an inch took a meter. TK U MLJ LV NV

A story with no quotation marks. Conversation should have them ... BUT ... this tale has few or no actual conversations. There IS some communication among characters that is probably accurately narrated, but the characters are NOT talking (and developing the story) themselves. Loss of points!

Thank goodness for hot tubs! A whole lot of sex must not have happened before their ‘invention!’ Hot springs are not common enough in the ‘wild’ to carry the sex-opportunity weight.

Very poorly written cuck and whore garbage.