All Comments on 'How Love Is Made'

I have mixed feelings about this story. First of all let me congratulate you because it's very well narrated. It really captured me. I like your way with words.

It's a pity I found several negatives: I don't understand the title and why she told herself that. I don't buy 1st time anal just with spit (and outdoors). I expected some kind of remark about The Longest Yard, but nothing. And lastly, the cheating part felt very off putting and unnecessary.

In any case, good job!

I have to agree with Harry . Although well narated . There were conflicting scenarios . The first anal scene was obviously not her first . Which is fine . GR8 scene . The second scene was awesome . But no anal as the title suggests . The third encounter was completely out of place . Again no anal . And deception is certainly not " How Love Is Made ". Beautiful writing but misguided intent . Cheating and the title probably do not belong in the same story .

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