All Comments on 'How My Lover Became My Second Wife'

I was going to offer constructive advice BUT then I realised that it was just so much fantasy as to be ridiculous. Are you sure you aren't aged 18?

He's a stay-at home-dad while his wife works and pays all the bills. So he fucks around, thinks he's a Dom (Ha.Ha.) and fulfills no practical purpose. Then he wakes up, realises he's delusional and retarded and also that he's a fat, balding, middle-aged man. Such is life.

A little better fleshed out than MCW. No problem here with taking another whack at the same story. Next time, think about having some problem develop that your solves with the help of his partners.