All Comments on 'How My Mom Wants Us: Seduction'

I think the story was carry poorly written.

That was disgusting and just pathetic. Not only was it poorly written but clearly not thought out.

Is your cousin's brother not still your cousin?

"her older cousin brother"

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What the fuck is a cousin brother? Your cousin's brother is still your cousin.

Mediocre at best . . .

Likely more deprived than self-portraded and not experiencing ant of the joys of university.

Cannot even get to an Average rating, so much work, or re-working required.

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You know you're in bad shape when the introductory sentence doesn't make sense. Go back to the editing bay.

gives me bad thoughts about having a thing like this in my life.

The cousin brother thing is confusing to some probably because of the cultural difference. I’m pretty sure that this story takes place in India or with Indian people. The names give it away. In India people call their cousins, cousin brother or cousin sister. Like if someone says i have a cousin. Okay then are they male, female? It’s not specified right. But saying i have a cousin sister I’m really close with gives a better picture.

Good Story. Enjoyed it .

Please make long stories with more plot. Love to read the seduction attempts in detailed made by mom on her son and daughter.