by Koolmaan171
Liked the story idea but you need to pick one language. It is almost impossible to read in the format you have written.
good idea but,,,,,,do 1 version in English and the other version in another language; mixing the languages is confusing and takes the user out of the scene you are trying to create.
Pretty good one..... Continue with the next part... And write a bigger story this time...
Nice story concept but I would suggest one thing you can write this story in one language in the first page and can use the native language in the second page so that people who wants to ignore other language can ignore it. By the way again I say nice concept and I'm eagerly waiting for the second part I'll follow your series.
Nice concept. But one suggestion I would give you is you can write the English version of this story in the first place and can write your native language in the second page so that people who wanna read in their desire language can read one page and can ignore other page. By the way again I say nice story and I'm waiting for the upcoming parts I'll follow this series.
sorry for the language issue. writing in othyer languages gives the characters the authenticity. also this is one of my first attempts.
As getting stories through in literotica is tough. I have written the further parts on xossipy. Please check there. Same name. It has lots of freedom unlike here. Sorry with the platform change.
Will you have her take on the form of an anthro cow? Horns, hooves,tail, body and mind changes?