All Comments on 'How She Cucked Me'

The premise is interesting but your story is bland. Lacks character development, tension, details, emotional build up, etc. it’s just a sequence of events.

Hard to follow. Paragraphs were all mixed up. First he went in the bathroom to dry them off after their shower then he let her lover in the front door. You should probably use an editor to avoid simple errors like that.

You really want to proof and edit your story at least once, and better yet several times before posting. I know it’s easy to get excited and want to share as quickly as possible, but it’s always better to slow down.

His wife is a walking STD. Why would he stay with her for ten seconds? Badly thought out drivel.

1 star