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Continue the dreams for Amanda - good job thus far! Maybe give her more to dream about after going undercover at a leather bar where she meets both mistresses and/or masters who put her through her paces as their non-consentual submissive - and give her more to dream about afterwards! Sound like a plan?

Not the story I expected, but perhaps a better one.

Which should be read first? This or the other on this same day?

At the shadowy edge between the waking and dream state there is some confusion between what is reality and what is fantasy. Here our hero Amanda, an investigative reporter, is on the track of kidnappers but while she has made contact in her dreams, she's hesitant to take the steps that would liberate the kidnapped women. Freedom for the abductees means the stripes of the cat and nine tails on Amanda. Will Amanda open the book that unlocks the cage where abductees are ensconced? CarlUrvile presents a great story.

Good Story"

Awake in a nightmare

What is the line between dream and reality? People whose work involve creativity and imagination may have difficulty defining the difference.