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All Comments on 'How to Mend a Broken Heart'

by MillieDynamite

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Jackie.HikaruJackie.Hikaruover 1 year ago

Really loved the vivid imagery and particularly enjoyed how the pacing becomes more frenetic the closer Adrienne gets to orgasm. Great work!

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreover 1 year ago

5 stars

I like that he came back in the end.

AliceWadeAliceWadeover 1 year ago

Love this one, Miss Dynamite!

DarkRaven13DarkRaven13over 1 year ago

I loved how the story started. It was like listening to a conversation. The ending reached a nice climax (no pun intended) ... but I actually liked the part about the woman watcher. We never really learned about her. I'm not sure if this may be set up for a future, related story ... but I think not. And that makes it even better. :)

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I’m a married black lesbian. My wife’s name is Jo. I love writing and do publish some professionally. I’m also a paid ghostwriter. I write a lot of kink stories. I love feedback, so don’t be shy, hate my work, or love it. Just let me know which. For the time being, this is all...