All Comments on 'How To Say No To Your Boss? Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Super very hot

blueyes4ublueyes4ualmost 3 years ago

very sexy n stimulating

CharmlesCharmlesalmost 3 years ago

Damn... this is really awesome. Love the story, love the buildup and and love the writing. Yeah even the typos not a urn-off. Looking forward to the next!!

Consider me a fan!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

welcome back, hope you'll write more stories!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

can you write a story where the seduction happened due to a bet

Urbanbreaker13Urbanbreaker13almost 3 years ago

I think that this story is very promising. Every time you write, you become more confident and thus produce a better result. I disagree with you about how plausible a story should or shouldn't be, as there are different levels for each one of us but i respect your mentality. One problem that persists in your stories is the length of the sex scenes, in this case less than 2 paragraphs. For me , a nice built up deserves a good lengthy sex scene even if it is masturbation. Waiting for part 2. (4*)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You write very well. But I believe this store belongs in the BI Curious section or maybe loving wives section. Your MC is married to a man

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I'm a young man with a passion for erotic literature. I am not a native English speaker but I try to do my best. My favorite type of story is about slow lesbian seductions.