by freefantasies
Damn... this is really awesome. Love the story, love the buildup and and love the writing. Yeah even the typos not a urn-off. Looking forward to the next!!
Consider me a fan!
I think that this story is very promising. Every time you write, you become more confident and thus produce a better result. I disagree with you about how plausible a story should or shouldn't be, as there are different levels for each one of us but i respect your mentality. One problem that persists in your stories is the length of the sex scenes, in this case less than 2 paragraphs. For me , a nice built up deserves a good lengthy sex scene even if it is masturbation. Waiting for part 2. (4*)
You write very well. But I believe this store belongs in the BI Curious section or maybe loving wives section. Your MC is married to a man