All Comments on 'How We Became Sex Coaches Ch. 01'

stupid

Please continue.

It's really hot, please continue to chapter 2.

It has the feel of a setup to swinging by the ladies. Please continue.

Keep it coming.

Good little tale with descriptive text which put us there with them. Would be good to have 3 on 1 so they all explore each of the ladies. (Sorry, not into all exploring a guy). Watch ‘labia’, it’s plural, so one labium and two labia. Labium sounds a bit unusual so it’s often best to construct the sentence so you can talk about both labia. Good to have you back writing. Thanks.

Thanks to everyone for reading and the feedback. Chapter 2 was just submitted. I hope you enjoy it.

well, i think ray and sarah should have stayed and shared the bed! lol, otherwise a fun read, and well written..