by StevensChoice26
Very sexy and erotic. What fun. You write well. Would love to take a similar trip with my wife. Would you two like to cum? 😊
I loved the originality of the story and the son showing up was a great twist. Having an editor would be a plus, more problems than the average story. It won't stop me from checking out some of your other stories however.
So glad she didn't fuck anyone. My wife likes to be the only one naked in front of our friends, she's great to look at, plays around and lets them touch her, but they all know she's not going to fuck anyone. That way it's all in fun and everyone has a good time, just like in your story.
Wow such a hot and believable story, had me excited from almost the beginning.
Another great story from you! Good sexy fun, with a sensitive approach to young Jordon's "initiation".
Great story. I'd prefer a little more reluctance and embarrassment from the wife to put up with hubby's requests, but still great.
Well done! You developed the main character very well and move the plot along with nice details but didn't get too carried away with them. Your ending left open further adventures of the heroine and he clever hubby!
Thanks for the time and effort to bring us a light and compelling story.