by SirenoftheDeep
A classic... and this is a great tribute to it, and great writing. It's well-written and arousing as hell.
I look forward to seeing more from you, Siren!
Never saw the movie but if it would had turned out to be just like your version, I would be sure to see it!
Really loved it. The tension was growing better by the minute and at some spot I wasn't able to stop reading, even when it was 4 AM in the morning....
Definitively this story needs a second part, I have some ideas if you need ;)
Will surely be expecting to read more from you ;)
Nice
Judt watched the original again and had ne wondering if somebody gave it the literotic treatment. Enjoyed how you essentially told the same encounter over and over again (much like the inevitable multiple orgasms) but changed enough to keep it from getting to stale. Even though a follow up would be more of the same, it does need further installments.