All Comments on 'Hunter's Surprise'

That was so awesome! This story is so hot I think I saw stars a few times. There are not enough good bondage stories in the G/M category on this site. Completely awesome! Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go read the rest of your submissions!

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oh I liked this story too mmm exciting stuff, please keep up the good work ;)

Well written, hot and imaginative. 10,000 kudos. You've got a new fan.

As someone else said, not cute, but works just as well in a different way! Why aren't you writing some more?

Great erotic read

OMG! That was hot!!!

god this is real man sex turned on. thinking and wanting to get into the story and screw them all hard and breathless.

Yeah. No.

Across your chapters/stories the depiction of Hunter is confusing and frustrating. While he clearly has bi tendencies he seemed pretty sure he was gay with Steve in the first story. This one where he introduced Gavin into a three way made him seem deeply gay - and not just with Steve but actively engaging with others too. Then the chapters from the video store painted Hunter as a straight guy who had not only chosen to marry a woman but was now a father with a baby. That seems like a stretch for a guy who so clearly embraced his gay passions. And I feel terrible for his wife and child that he obviously has a double life. There was no need to complicate these stories with that unnecessary and insignificant (to the stories) information. Plus how could Steve still be so in love with Hunter when he’s made his choice and it was not Steve!