by Spartan_Preferred
Excellent work, great start and solid foundation for more; wasn’t sure at the beginning but got hooked in pretty soon. I was really drawn in and moved by the guitar / song scene: “I let my Fender weep, shedding the tears that just wouldn't fall from my eyes” is a great line and captures such emotion, love it. Poetic. Not what one typically finds here and maybe not as sexual, overall, but I look forward to your development of that aspect with the same quality.
This is awesome. I feel bad that it’s taken me so long to read this. At least I have one more chapter out at the moment. I can’t wait for more!