by partwolf
A nice beginning with a good setup. Both character and plot wise. My only critique is watch switching back\forth from first person and some small errors with grammer. Need an editor or beta reader to help catch those. Otherwise, nicely done.
BUT don't start a story like this without several more chapters ready for press. Otherwise, you kill the reader's interest. We are seven full days past your first chapter and no second chapter yet! Give us some story!!!
And hopefully will be out in the morning in the Non-Human section. The chapters come as I have time to write them, this is just fun for me. Thanks for the idea though.
https://www.literotica.com/s/hunting-wolves-ch-02
I am disgusted by rape and anything to do with it. Authors need to learn to flag their fucking stories correctly. I wish authors would be banned for that shit. Not one chapter in this heap of garbage contained a warning.
Dear Other Anonymous,
She didn't want to go into the cold water, but was enjoying the sex. You gave a one out of some mind block trigger. So, no. Author should NOT be reported for not adding reluctance/no consent tag. So I gave 5 stars to discount your non objective unrealistic 1!
The author clearly made the lake scene willing, Too bad some are too high in their tower to see it.
Oh for fuck's sake... There must be some crazy ass contingent of people out there because I constantly see complains about non-consensual stories. This story doesn't even come close to that. He wasn't raping her. Frankly, since you're reading a Were story you might be more concerned about your penchant for bestiality than trying to make everything other than straight up missionary in a bed rape. If you don't want to read about graphic sex there's a whole universe of material out there that won't offend you.
Rape? Wth? Where did someone ever get that idea? I guess this is another example of certain people being insisting that something has happened even though it has not occurred. Lots of that happening these days.
You've got to love the way "anon's" come along, don't bother reading, don't take into account that this is "fiction and fantasy." and project their own silly psychologies onto a story that is generally good.. although I do wish Lit would expand the ratings to 1-10 stars, I read many that defintely rate more than 4, but that don't really rate 5. Makes it hard to differentiate between the merely very good and the brilliant.