by lockerman138
I think it's a bit odd to criticize someone for their sexual fantasies. You sound a bit like one of those morons that believed that praying the gay away is something real. How about you crawl under whatever rock you came out of and keep your idiotic thoughts to yourself. Realize that your fantasies will also likely be viewed by someone else as odd and disgusting and if you don't like the cuckold genre or the stories then you were given fair warning ahead of time. Go be dumb somewhere else.
I don't mind Pandoras box because I didn't write this story or any of my stories to make money because I don't care. Instead I write them for an audience of one and if they enjoy it then I did my hobby well. I put it in here for a place where others can understand that their sexual kinks aren't odd and because sometimes what you are looking for isn't around until you find it.
Good story. Had me hooked the whole time. Few considerations for the next one or next chapter:
- better description of each character. Like how tall was Erin? Her measurements? Color of her skin and hair color? Color of her nipples, etc. how big was the masseuse vs Shane etc.
- more description of the sex like what did the room sound like, smell like, her noises etc.
But overall I liked it.