All Comments on 'Husband and wife, Night of Passion'

Note to readers: I know there are a few mistakes in here, that will teach me not to proof it first!

Excellent story. I wish my wife would read this.

Thanks anonymous, I wish mine would as well! 😂 little bits in this were true but mostly what I would like to happen with mine. If you want me to write one with your wife just DM me

@mrmark83 the small mistakes weren't that noticeable. This was still a very hot story. You should keep this going if you can do it.

Wow, this was such a hot story I have read in a while. So relatable

DanDraper, thanks for the comment. Really appreciate it. My previous stories got some rude comments so it’s good to have comments like these. Any suggestions are more than welcome.

Excellent storie

Truly enjoyable story. It was really hot. Great job!!!!

I love Mark’s stories. Realistic but still seriously hot!

Thanks for the great reviews, more stories on their way! Any suggestions welcome!