All Comments on 'Husband Leads Valerie into BDSM'

The story moves along briskly, but does need an editor. Valerie’s cravings for cock and pain make for a good story.

Good concept; hot story. But horribly written. Keep writing, but get an editor next time.

How Val kept her fetish from hubby is curious.

Stop writing, eat shit and die!

And hubby gets to be a member for

a. Breathing

b. Bringing in fresh meat

Okie dokie

This needs to be edited.