All Comments on 'Husband Went Too Far'

This play script mode is not designed for story writing. Way hard and painful to get through. We get no sense of what people are feeling or the setting. The information comes across so slooooowly from the stilted two way conversation.

Both because of the bad script-type format (why not combine the ongoing dialogue of one person into a single section rather than separating every phrase?) and the lack of capitalization. Have a little respect for the reader, please!

The essence of this story is the erotic concept of power. The moment when he realizes he is physically helpless can be like an orgasmic climax for those who have this particular fetish.

The way TONYA is so low key can be a disappointment for some, but I think it only adds to the sense of her power.