All Comments on 'Hush'

Stylish and stunning and what a build to the final *ahem* climax!

Where you have used three 'Hush' repetitively, I suggest about additional space line before one Hush, then repeating following the Hush.

"... pushed back against her as best as I could" in this sentence I would suggest as best I could. I think, reading both options, you might likely agree.

I suppose if it makes your defective brain feel better about itself, then knock yourself out sissy.

Can you stop posting all this crap. Youre a terrible writer

I quite enjoy reading your stories. They are short and easily digestible and I hope you don't let the negative comments below affect you continue to create more of your works. Know that you have at least a couple of fans here.