All Comments on 'Hybrid Theory Ch. 02'

Glad your back and I hope you will be updating again soon as possible for all your stories. I've had too many authors I like on this site disappear with story series unfinished. ::gives many cookies for returning.:: I did have to reread the first chapter to refresh my memory but still glad your back.

ok i get he was sheltered and all, but if the guy is going to actually do anything besides a bad vanilla ice impersonation then he needs an i q over 3. i mean how can he breathe by himself with that lack of common sense? where is his money that his mom left him or does he not know about it since he thinks they were broke growing up?

Good to see you back, need to re-read beforecatching up again, looking forward to your next posting.

Looks like you are loosing your touch...

But still worth a 5

I enjoyed reading about Gabe's powers in this chapter. I do hope you will be able to have chapter 3 out sooner than later. Nice story so far. Keep at it.

I love the story and can't wait to see where it's going. I just wanted to keep reading but the chapter ended. The only thing is how he mood changes. I think it is a bit much.

he reminds me too much of the classical dim witted anime protagonist like luffy from one piece or Naruto. i much prefer the characters in your other stories especially Titus since it seems like nothing fazes him. gabe is just too much. and is he gay? cuz i am seriously wondering right now

I think this story is good but has the potential to be amazing. If you were to change Gabe and his "pimp and bitches" attitude because it's frustrating hearing him talk that way. Another change would be Gabe's mood swings. It makes him sound like a pregnant woman with PMS. Last but not least, the way he knows nothing of the college life or even life outside where he lived. You mentioned Gabe has a tv and internet; therefore, he should at least know something from watching shows. I really enjoyed reading your story and I hope you will consider the above change and can make the story better than it already is.

Overall, i think this was a good chapter. A few thing I would have changed, but oh well. I can't wait for more

Also it would be great if you would give us status updates more often. Like just to say you're alive and working on more, doing good, but a little more frequently.

dont change a thing.. well u kno other than some gramtical errors lol.. it made me laugh so many times.. ur awesome.. keep writing love it..

Yay!!

bro that was fricking hilarious. i hope you post regularly, cause i am waiting for the next chapter

hope you do not make wait as much again i was actually waiting for the next chapter to begin reading and thanks for sharing

Man, you just had to make him a fucking retard, huh? Its a miracle he can even breathe by himself.

Well I read this story and Titus, and I think you should keep posting when you can even if there aren't any erotic scenes coming...

Looking forward to whatever comes next.

Please let his varied emotional state be tied to coming into his angelic powers. Sensing others emotions around him, having to deal with his own more intensely, or some other reasonable scenario. Don't just leave him a raving but with no consistency and allow readers to lose focus. Vulnerability is not bad, unexplained multiple personality disorders in a main character are.

Please hurry with the next chapter I'm dying waiting I just can't wait

Awaiting your updates, hope all is good with you

This was another great chapter waiting for the next one.

i like the story alot would like if u finish great job

Can't wait for more:)

But you mr author are a fucking tease. You have started so many good stories and I sincerely doubt youll ever finish even a single one of them..

I am mostly disappointed coz most good stories here get abandoned...

I hope you complete all your stories but I doubt it'll ever happen.

This story is amazing :) I'm glad your back... :)

Hope you continue this story , has all the ear marks of an excellent tale.

The story is awesome.. But please please finish this..... Your all stories are unfinished.. But all are really good..

Can someone complete this story if this dude's not ready to do so... I'm fvckinq tired of waitinq goddammit...