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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
New series? Count me in!

This somewhat reminds me of an old light novel project (dunno if its still going now) where all the students had some sort of hyper syndrome. Like one girl's butt would keep swelling over the years, another kept getting taller etc etc.

If you do plan to make this series like that I would love to see it.

So far a good a good chapter. I got a little confused when Penelope shouted "She's a mutant" because it was sudden and out of place? Like we are still in Mate's Point of View when it suddenly changes to Penelope struggling to fit her ass in the chair.

If you do plan to change POV just give a heads up or something? Really confused me here

Go2daWestGo2daWestover 3 years ago

Very much wnjoyed

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