All Comments on 'Hyperactive Testes Disorder Pt. 04'

You need to have this guy fill a pool of cum then have a pool party with slutty women. Heck, make the condo complex convert to nudist one and fill it with women who love cum. Go crazy with this unbelievable but hot story!

Loved how jealousy and insecurity came into play. A bit disappointed when u took that away. Would be hotter to bring it back

Thanks for the feedback. As much as I like to go outlandish, a pool filled with cum might be a little too far for me. lol I will be pushing it a little more in the next chapter, just not that far.

And to the Jealousy comment. I agree that what the insecurity drove her to do was pretty hot, but I thought them coming together at the end, no pun intended, was a nice resolution. Not to mention a great climax for this chapter, again no pun intended. lol

Awesome ...story.. I mean too good I loved it...n please write as much you can ...please update daily ..I love your stories ...

I really enjoy this series; thank you for writing it. One piece of feedback would be to have Mike make more noises. These last chapters he’s seemed a bit like the backdrop. I appreciated him expressing insecurity about the relationship status between him and his roommate, and I just need him to make a bit more noise. ;)

Thanks for the encouragement. The next chapter has been submitted and is currently pending review by the website moderators. I can't write every day, I appreciate that you enjoy my stories that much though. I typically put out about 1 to 2 chapters a week. Anymore than that, and I start to get burned out. Truth be told, I also tend to only write these when I'm both inspired and horny. lol

Thanks for the feedback. Honestly, I wasn't sure what you meant by more noises at first. I thought you meant more grunts and stuff. lol So thanks for clarifying that. As mentioned above, I've already submitted the next chapter, but I'll see what I can do for the chapter after that.

... picturing Sophie standing in the doorway just getting blasted by saying hello hahaha hahaha

Thanks. I thought it was a funny idea as well. I like peppering in humor wherever possible.