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SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 4 years ago
Nice twist

A pleasant read, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

A twist ending!

BCTgirlBCTgirlabout 4 years ago
A good first part

As you hit the bottom of the page it’s like you gave up

That last paragraph or two should have been the next pages or next chapters

GforGrahamGforGrahamabout 4 years agoAuthor
750 word competition

This was my entry into the competition for Feb 2020. It could only contain 750 words.

Besides, I thought any further would be superfluous as we found out the results.

BigJim48BigJim48about 4 years ago
Hypno Hubby Great Twist!

I loved the ending. The wife/spouse/partner tried to screw him & got the SHAFT. Great!

Leroi123Leroi123about 1 month ago

Makes little sense. I suppose that's bec. it was limited in length.

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I want to write more stories floating in my head, hoping they are shorter. Had 3+ years but cancer is back and treatment is starting. Hopefully this time can be rid of it. 11 Sep 20. Trying to get back to writing. It's slow going, as after 8 weeks of daily radiation treatment ...