All Comments on 'Hypnosis - Awakening Ch. 01'

Great start. Would love to see more

You might as well put Madam Marisson to work while Ashley is collecting the rent. I am sure she would be happy to clean the apartment. She might even think it is a great idea to video and stream the rent collection process so that Mr. Smith can make a few dollars on the side.

A very nice beginning.

This is going to be a great series. I can see both 'collecting' the rent and even sharing it with each other....please continue

please wash yourself thoroughly before you do this again - I felt so sorry for the daughter having to taste your dirtiness.

This is a great start to the story. Can't wait to see more

good buildup of characters

More Please!

I like the beginning, but give it a real plot and storyline.

Wish you would continue