by Bbart1227
I felt the ending was a little abrupt but other than that, this was a good story. 5-stars.
Clever premise.
But the sex was rushed.
Needed dialog. You smell delicious. Would you like me to touch your pussy? Should I kiss it? Lick it?
My cock is so hard. Do you want to touch my cock? Play with my balls. Gently. Put it in your mouth.
Four stars.