All Comments on 'Hypnotrack Ch. 03: Melissa'

I really like how the guy is working this and how he wants to dig deeper into what makes this work. Most stories wouldn't have the character care about how it works, just use it. It adds a nice touch and some possible plotlines. Keep it up.

This has the making of a great story. I'm looking forward to reading more of it. Thank you!

why din't the video affect him as well?

@sniperking - It did. ;) Read on, and youl'l see how. And ay close ttention, in this chapter, t ohis decleative statemet, 'I am the star of your every sexual fantasy' - bearing in mind what Melissa's fantasies ARE, and that as established, he knows them well.

Incredibly enjoyable read, very interesting plot idea of breaking down the functioning of the video in a 'safe' manner. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.