All Comments on 'I Advertised for a Man to Get Me Pregnant'

It's the outline of a good story

Interesting story!

5

I felt as if the author was on a merry-go-round (carousel???) and I was on the ground near it. Every time he/she passed me there would be a sentence or two about the story which continued the whole time the carousel was turning. This ended up with me getting small doses of the story and I had to guess what was going on most of the time. An interesting approach to being an author, but a lousy experience at being the reader. 3* for it being at least novel.

The title is in first person, but the story is in the third person. Reads like an outline, not an actual full story.

What is this? A news interview? An online article? Not sure what you were trying to accomplish here.