All Comments on 'I Awoke'

Excellent!

(I suggest using an editor for a second set of eyes, to avoid simple grammatical errors.)

Spelling terrible, grammar abominable. For goodness' sake get an editor! Having said that, the story was promising.

You definitely need an editor for spelling and grammar. But congrats on your first story!

A few other tidbits:

-Where is his wife? So he moved to a new city....why is his wife not with him?

-She's going to trim him....Is he not worried about his wife showing up? Does he not go visit her wherever she may be? Might be hard explaining that one.

-And "Uncomplicated sex" and "affair" don't really go together.