All Comments on 'I Bet...'

Welcome back!

This is your first story that I didn't like, I'm sorry. Connor and Janet are both much too unpleasant, and Janet is too angry.

Could this basic idea be done well? Probably, but not like this.

"Demon Among Us", I didn't like, but it's well done. This isn't.

Thanks for the feedback and sorry it wasn’t to your liking.

I liked it, a quick story, with a lot of potential. In this case, that anger of Janet's means Connor would constantly have to watch his back, or his balls.

God, I would love to see a followup to this